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The Week it Rained Every Day

Last week I sent all three of my boys off to their first days of school.

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Kaleb's first day

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Nathan's first day (It was raining when he went to school...I didn't get many good pictures, and caused a mini traffic jam getting this one by shooting through the car window while in the junior high drop-off loop)

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Jake's first day of school...he gets to drive himself this year!

I argued with Nathan's counselor. (The problem with his schedule is still not resolved.)

I listened very solemnly to Kaleb talk about how he is different now he is in fouth grade (he doesn't "play" anymore, he "hangs out," and he needs to read "important, hard books," preferably about monsters).

I shopped a great sale but bought myself nothing.

I ran 14-ish miles, some sluggish, some blissful, a few that felt entirely effortless.

I finished Tell the Wolves I'm Home and it made me cry. I started The Storied Life of A. J. Fikry and it made me laugh.

I got to see Haley.

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(She drove Kaleb to school on his first day, per his request.)

I talked to my husband. I laughed with him. I came home to find him painting the trim on the garage. I also argued with him and wished I wasn't. I wished I could make things better somehow.

I spent hours talking with Jake. There—I also wish I could make that better. That hardness he is going through. Some of it is my fault, some of it his, but he is in a hard place he doesn't know how to get out of and all I can help him with is words.

I talked to my mom. I texted with my sister while she drove to California. I talked to my other sister on the phone.

I prayed. I laughed. I cried.

I made chocolate chip cookies with Nathan, and potato salad, and confetti rice salad, and roast beef with balsalmic vinegar.

I ate one of the most delicious watermelons of the summer.

There was rain nearly every day, which was like a sacrament. There was morning snow on my favorite mountain. There was a rainbow tonight that was so beautiful I made my neighbors come outside and admire it with me.

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Tonight, I felt like something I've been struggling with was finally righting itself, and for one good, long hour I could breath deeply. I felt, if not exactly free, then lightened of my Atlas stone. When it turned left, the resettling of weight was almost unbearable, but then I told my friends the story of the day I lost my temper with my classful of 4th-period hooligans and shouted the F word at them, and then we all laughed together and the weight readjusted itself to a more bearable spot.

And then, just now, because I couldn't sleep and he wasn't asleep yet, Jake and I went outside (after midnight in the pouring rain) to put out the drain spouts together, and then we rain in the drenching storm, and the cold didn't make us go inside, or being soaked all the way through—but eventually the lightning did.

It was a good week and a hard one. It was usual for my life right now, and I know one day life will change and I will miss these days (as I miss other days) so I am making peace with the hard and savoring the good.

How was your week?


on Facebook

My husband hates Facebook.

I mean...seriously. He hates it. He doesn't have a Facebook page, but he hates it. He doesn't see why you'd want to share all your personal, private stuff with a bunch of people who are only "friends," not really friends. He doesn't know why anyone would care what someone else had for breakfast.

Since he doesn't have a Facebook page, he also doesn't know what people actually DO on Facebook.

Every time he sees me on Facebook he gets annoyed.

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Which sometimes makes me defensive because it's not like he's the boss of me, and if I want to putz around on Facebook it's really not his choice, right? And it’s not like I spend hours and hours on Facebook. Just some time, usually when I’m on my phone and we’re just hanging out, doing nothing.

Sometimes it just makes me think about why I like having a FB page and putzing around on it. In fact, he asked me that just a few nights ago, I think out of sincerity and not annoyance: why do you like Facebook? After I thought about it I decided:

it's like having friends.

Which sounds like I'm the most pathetic person ever, so let me explain. Because really: I do have friends. Good friends whom I cherish.

But I've never been one of those people who has tons and tons of friends. I'm OK with that, as I would rather have the handful of authentic friends I have then a bazillion casual relationships. But sometimes, I confess, I wish I had more friends. And when you're scrolling through Facebook, reading bits and pieces of other people's lives—people you know, however remotely—it feels a little bit like hanging out with a whole bunch of friends.

 I enjoy that feeling, even while I’m simultaneously understanding that it’s not 100% authentic. We create an image of ourselves on Facebook, using the words, images, links, likes, and discussions we put out there. It’s not dishonest, just not the whole picture.

A couple of months ago, an old friend from high school found me on Facebook and sent me a friend request. We chatted briefly when I accepted it, and then here and there, started liking some of the other's statuses. Getting to know a little bit about the life of a person we used to know, years ago.

We've chatted a couple of times since then, and the last time he said something like "it seems like you are happy" and then I got sort of defensive. Calling my life happy seemed like a sort of...flattening of it. Because yeah: I’m happy. But I’m many other things, too.

And then I thought some more about Facebook, and why I use it. (USE it? Am I, like Kendell hints, an actual Facebook addict? Do I use it in a way that makes me not have to deal with real life? I don't know.)

I spent some time, in fact, reading through my status updates for all of 2014, so I could maybe see the image I’ve created of myself there. I discover I post a lot about running, reading, and gardening. Quilting when I am actively quilting. Some little bits about scrapbooking. I post lots of flower pics, and some of my kids (I try to keep a good balance of this, because I don't want to post things they would be embarrassed to share), and some of weather. (WEATHER! How boring am I?) I also, despite protesting to Kendell that no one really posts about what they had for breakfast, share quite a few foodie details. I post about some of my adventures; this year they've included the bear den, hiking, Ragnar, my trip to Cabo, my trip to Yosemite.

And, you know: my friend from high school is right. If all you knew about me was my Facebook statuses, you probably would think I was flatly happy. Because I don't ever post the whole truth. Probably no one does, right? Like...take that trip to Cabo. The pictures and the status updates make it look like, ah, fabulous! Peaceful beachy happy time with family, right? Swimming in the surf, relaxing by the pool, running on the beach. My motivation for sharing was to, literally, share. Because it was beautiful and fun and good. And plus there's the fact that I don't, in my usual Amy life, do stuff like that.

But what I didn't ever post about was how much I felt like a cuckoo bird. Like I didn't quite fit in the nest my mom and sister have made. The argument my mom and I had over what words you can use to call other people and how it left my feeling defensive and on edge and like she’ll never be able to see me as who I really am. The lingering feeling that I am the bad sister, the disappointing daughter who almost made the right choices but not quite. The thing that someone said to me that made me feel small and insignificant. Or that I felt guilty for spending not a small amount of money on myself, and for enjoying the time away from motherhood and wifehood so thoroughly. The complicated emotion of enjoying the vacation but also feeling like I was intruding on my sister’s good will.

Who would post that on Facebook?

Because it’s not a space where you really, really trust people, is it? Your real friends are there, but also your best friend from elementary school who turned popular in middle school and left you behind. (Why am I Facebook friends with her?) The wife of your husband’s coworker, who from every angle (body, but also personality and relationship skills and career and homemaker and mother) seems perfect and so makes you feel intimidated. The old childhood friend whose 200-mile running weeks make your 50-mile weeks look pathetic. Girls from high school who you don’t even really like and have nothing in common with other than you went to high school together, and you’re not even sure if you clicked “like” on one of their posts if she’d know who you were.

We want the people who used to know us to think we turned out successfully (or at the very least normal). We want our family members to think we have it all together and never fight with our spouses. We want our co-workers to think we’re intelligent, our kids to think we’re cool, our neighbors to think we cook perfect dinners and keep our house perfectly clean. We don’t want to confess that the fact that the girl who used to be our fifth-grade best friend is now married to a doctor, fabulously wealthy, and obviously really—no, really—happy makes us green with jealousy, so we like posts and post smileys and keep our ugliness hidden.

We try to make our lives look beautiful.

(Or, at least: I do.)

Maybe Kendell’s right.

Except I still like Facebook. I like seeing how old friends from high school turned out, and getting to know (some of them) better. I like being exposed to other people’s ideas and opinions. And, if I’m thoroughly, painfully honest, I like feeling like I’m a part of something, even though I know it’s mostly illusion.

The same day that Kendell asked me why I like Facebook, I read an article somewhere about a guy who did a Facebook experiment. He decided to like everything that came up on his page, just to see what happened, and then end result was that he didn’t like his Facebook page anymore. I thought his conclusion was sort of obvious—if you are clicking Like on things you don’t actually like, what do you think will happen?—but it made me think about carrying out my own, more subtle Facebook experiment: being more real. Being more myself. Posting fragments of poems I like just because I like them (instead of worrying that people will think I’m weird or, even worse, highbrow). Making references to movies and songs no one else remembers or cares about. (“That’s because you don’t own a Prada backpack.”) Letting some of the tarnish show.

Not because I care what people think. Actually…yes, I do. If I’m going to spend time on Facebook, I want it to be authentic. And I have never been someone who only shows the shiny bits. I try to be honest, and to tell the whole story, and I think it’s time to be that person not only on my blog (which almost no one reads anymore anyway), but among the Facebook “friends” I’ve accumulated. In the hopes of perhaps making more of them actual, real friends, who know that I am happy but also depressed sometimes, worried about my kids, frustrated with my husband, ashamed of where I live and of some of my life choices, disappointed at how I turned out, jealous of other people’s happiness. That I’m human, but they love me anyway.

How do YOU feel about Facebook?


Italian Moment #2: Michelangelo's Atlas Slave

When you visit Italy, it is almost a commandment that you must see Michelangelo's David statue.
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(This is a replica of the real statue, which was moved inside to protect it from the elements.)
 
Everywhere you go in Italy, you see David postcards and little replica David statues and David coffee mugs and even David aprons. The David is housed in the Accademia Gallery in Florence—beautiful Florence, which is the Italian city I most want to revisit. _MG_0868 florence map
We walked to the museum under the careful direction of our tour guide, who gave us a sort of walking history lesson as we moved through Florence's streets.
 
My friend Steve, who'd gone to Italy the year before I did, had told me a hilarious story about how he took a picture of his traveling friend next to the David statue, and almost got thrown out of the Accademia for it because there is no photography allowed inside the museum, and how he'd pretended to wipe his memory card to be allowed to stay, but didn't really and then is still so happy to have that picture of David and his friend. And as I already felt like most of the other people in our tour group were highly annoyed by me, I definitely did not want to incur more sideways glances, so I didn't even try to sneak a photo.
 
But really, the David statue ended up being the least important thing I saw in that museum, at least for me.
 
David is situated in a gallery at the end of a wide, long, hall. (There is a good imagine HERE.) Leading the way (and, I suppose, your eye) are other pieces of artwork and sculpture, and here is where you find Michelangelo's Slave statues (they are also called the Prisoners). These are a series of four (actually there are six, but the other two are in the Louvre) sculptures of human form, only unlike David they aren't chiseled to perfection. Instead, they are works of "non-finito," purposefully left unfinished.
 
As our tour guide taught us about how Michelangelo worked—discovering the form within the slab of marble, rather than planning out the exact finished piece, and how this was a reflection of his belief that the sculptor was God's hands, revealing what He had hidden inside—I confess I only listened with one ear. Partly because, hello, I am a reader and a librarian, and more than once (although I'm not sure where, exactly), I've read this about Michelangelo. But mostly because the art was grabbing my attention, so, daring the wrath of my fellow tour group members, I wandered away. The statues—real Michelangelo, not something in a book—were drawing every bit of my attention.
 
So I stood in front of the first one, The Awakening Slave.
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(Photos of the Slaves taken from the Accademia website, as really: I didn't take a single picture inside!)
 
Slaves, and the idea of slaves, and all of the long centuries when the poor have had to do so much hard work for the wealthy—this was where my thoughts went. 
 
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The Young Slave
Michelangelo could've found any sort of character within those blocks of stone, Roman goddesses, Christian priests, farmers or midwives or kings. 

But inside stone he found slaves, people whose lives were about serving others.
 
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The Bearded Slave
How they must've wanted to break free of the stones of their lives, and how impossible that mostly proved.
 
At each sculpture, I could see this, the wanting to emerge but the impossibility of it. I know it is a statement about how the artist worked, and what he found inside of marble. I know it is supposed to be accidental, revealing what was always there. But to find, and partially set free, slaves from stone? The works said something more than only artistic process and creative expression. They said something about people, and how we are bound by where we find ourselves in our lives. Imperfect, yes, but also trying to be who we are. The unfinished stone the young, the awakening, and the bearded slaves were partially trapped in seemed organic, a thing they had always been emerging from.
 
I loved them, as art and statement and exploration.
 
But then I stood in front of the last unfinished slave in the hall, Atlas.
 
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And I, very quietly, wept.
 
Because some art is simply art: beautiful, moving, precise, exact. Unforgettable, of course. Amazing.
 
But some art is personal, because it communicates in a medium (paint, pencil, words, stone) a truth in the beholder's life. Not just communicates—it translates, from truth to an object. The truth brought into the world as something you can see and touch and maybe even smell.
 
Michelangelo's Atlas Slave is that kind of art for me.
 
Because here is a truth: I am the mother of teenagers. And listen, they aren't bad teenagers. I know bad teenagers; I know them hard and restless and impossible. I know I am blessed with good teenagers. They make me laugh and feel hope for the future and I love them more than anything.
 
But it is so hard to be the mother of teenagers. At first you were just you, just yourself. You still are yourself, or becoming yourself. Creating yourself. But with your body you've also created these beings, and at first you think you're just having a baby, but then they grow up and you realize you were having a person. A person with needs, issues, and foibles. And they become teenagers and you realize how much matters. Everything, in fact, matters. Because there are so many different possible damaging experiences. What if they sleep with their boyfriend? What if they stop believing in God? What if they take up drinking or drugs? What if they are in a car wreck? What if they fail their classes? What if they don't earn a scholarship, or make up with their best friend, or just experience some brief happy moments?
 
(What if something bad happens, and then another bad thing, and another, and then they can't deal at all and everything gets ruined? I must remind myself, again and again, that that is the stone of my making, not theirs. Not their destiny.)
 
So you're there—carrying the stone you are making yourself out of. But you also pick up their stone. You carry it in the form of worry, cajole, argument, fear, nightmares, discussions. Prayers. Hope. Some teaching. Some helping with homework at 2 in the morning.
 
But it's mostly all in your head, the weight, because they must do the work.
 
At that is why the Atlas statue made me weep. Because it is the way it feels to mother teenagers, made manifest.
 
Unlike the other statues, Atlas doesn't seem to be struggling to break free. He is only struggling to carry the load. To me, it isn't stone that he is emerging from; it is stone that has been folded over him. And look where it is: his shoulders, yes. But also his head. It is heavy and he wants to sit but he remains standing, he remains carrying, because what else can you do? You have to carry their weight in the only way you can. The hoping. The praying. I suppose, if you really wanted to, you could cast it off. Walk away with only your own burdens. But you won't. You love them too much, even though it is heavy.
 
All mothers are Atlases. We carrying the weight of our children's lives, and it is weighty because it is so important. Because we don't want them to be hurt. To feel hurt, to be irrevocably changed by it. We want them to look like David, in his beam of light at the end of the hall: perfect. But we know they will be slaves to their own stone.
 
Just as we are.
 
The weeping wasn't really about the weight. It was about the acknowledgment of it. It was about knowing, for the rest of my life, that there exists in the world a piece of art that captures how I feel. It was about how art erases loneliness because it makes you feel less alone in what you are experiencing. Even though maybe I am the only person in the world to have that response to that statue; even though Michelangelo did not intended, I am certain, to reach out a word of—what? comfort? of a sort—to a woman 500 years in the future, that is what art does.
 
So yes: I went to Italy and I saw the David sculpture. I walked around it quietly. I saw that his second toes are longer than his big toes. I marveled at how living he seems to be, for all his stone.
 
But what changed me, just a little bit but for forever, was Atlas.

Book Note: Hild, by Nicola Griffith

Hild, by Nicola Griffith, is not a book everyone will love. It is set in medeival Britain, and uses plenty of words from Old English, Old Irish, and Brythonic. (There is a glossary at the back.) (It is the second book I've read in a row that made me question when we started using the F word: it first appeared in print in 1680, so in Longbourn its use was timely, but here it is anachronistic.)  Hild coverMany of the characters' names are very similar (AEthelric, AEthelfrith, and AEthelburh, for example), which makes it hard to keep track of who's who. And, speaking of characters, there are a lot, many more than you'll find in the family tree at the start of the book. Many of the place names are not the ones you're likely to associate with Britain— Bernicia? Deira? Hwicce? Gwynedd? The politics are confusing. It casts Christianity in a muddy light. There are a handful of sex scenes; war, murder, death, and violence; and yes, the use of the F word (and a few other swears). At nearly 550 pages, it's a long book.
 
So now that all of the seeming negatives are out of the way (for me, the only real negative was not completely understanding the politics), can I tell you how much I loved this book? Loved it in the same way I love The Mists of Avalon, and for one of the same reasons: my inexplicable pull towards Britain, especially pre-ChristianBritain. Hild brings medieval England to life in extraordinary ways.
 
Hild was a real person; Saint Hilda, who established the Celtic-style monastery at Whitby. She had a reputation for wisdom; five of the men from her monastery became bishops, and kings and princes sought out her advice. But she was also known for her care for the poor.
 
This book explores her early years. Imagines them, really, as nothing is known of her except for her birth (the daughter of the exiled brother of King Edwin ofNorthumbria) and her baptism (in 627 along with the rest of King Edmund's royal family). She is imagined as King Edwin's seer; he relies on her to prophecy what choices he should make to further his ambition of being king over all of Britain.
 
In this time in Britain, the Romans had left centuries ago, but Edwin's wife brings a Roman bishop, Paulinus, with her when she marries him. The Catholic church is trying to establish itself in Britain, which had Christian priests but was mostly pagan.
 
The "prophecy" that Hild manages (from a very young age) is mostly based on her ability to observe carefully and then make connections between what she knows and what its impact might be. As she gets older, she trains with her oldest friend, Cian, for battles, as the king usually wants her to come along to the many different wars. Her mother, Breguswith (who predicted before her daughter was born that her baby would be "the light of the world"), is instrumental in encouraging Hild'sproclivity for seemingly-uncanny knowledge.
 
Hild uses her successes to build wealth and a sort-of extended family: her friend Begu who becomes her gemaecce (a formalized relationship, sort of like marriage, except between two women friends); her slave Gwladus who becomes more than a person who works for her; the Irish priest Fursey, who was captured in a battleHild prophesied and who taught her (and later her sister Hereswith) to read and write; different slaves, soldiers, and priests of Edwin's household. She convinces the king to give her land in Elmet (where she lived until her father was murdered), and so she also acquires her own retinue of farmers, servants, shepherds, and weavers.
 
These people help Hild in many ways, not the least of which is combating the loneliness she feels as the king's (very young) seer. But they also add tension, because if her prophecies and advice prove false, it isn't just her who will be punished, and this is where the story's suspense comes from. How will she guide the king to make decisions that will help both of them? She manipulates the outcomes of his decisions with hints, suggestions, timely dreams, and omens interpreted in ways that make him see different perspectives. She's fairly brilliant, actually, and she is motivated not just by her own position, but also the king's: she knows that kings always, eventually fall.
 
But it isn't just a novel of long-ago political maneuverings. It is also—mostly, in fact—just about long-ago life. The way they made cloth and clothes, what they ate and drank (all that mead and ale! were they ever sober?), the forms their relationships took. Also the landscape, and weather, and how they influenced nearly every part of their lives. Their health, too: there is one scene that describes what happens to a pregnant woman with untreated preeclampsia (not called that, of course; they didn't have a name for it, and only one solution, which was aborting the baby to save the mother) that is horrifying.
 
Also their religion.
 
Hild, I think, is like Emily Dickinson: she goes to church by going outside. Watching the way that plants grow, waves move, birds act, trees change, meadows evolve—this is how she partakes of the sacred. But also through her pagan observance for the god Woden. Perhaps because her real heart is within nature (and not tied absolutely to Woden), when it is politically astute for her to convert to Christianity, she does so. This part of the book was the most disturbing to me. The people give up their relationship to Woden, sometimes forcefully, for the Christian God and for Christ, but they only receive the hard parts of the religion. "Hard" not in the sense of difficult, but of unyielding. The God the priests tell them of is only one of thou-shalt-nots, of cold Sundays in stone churches. Of longing for death and giving up everything pleasant or joyful. They don't learn the full breadth of Christianity, of Christ's love, forgiveness, joy, grace, or charity. They only learn terror, and that they would give up their father's religion for what they are told is Christianity is utterly baffling to my (more-than-slightly pagan) heart. 
 
There is a scene in the book where Coifi, the main priest of Woden and used-to-be religious adviser to the king (now supplanted by Paulinus), must show his allegiance to the now-Christian Edwin by desecrating the god's holy place. There is a spiraling path outlined by trees that leads to the totem at the center, and Coifihas to kill Woden by throwing a spear into the heart of the enclosure. An iron-tipped spear, because Woden forbade any edged weapons near his totem. "Woden, god of war and the wild hunt, god of chaos and uncertainty, pain and death, was unpredictable." But Coifi still flings the spear, and there is no lightning or thunder, no reply from Woden; one of the newly-baptized soldiers pulls the small wooden Woden's spear off from the cord around his neck and drops it into the grass.
 
Now he only wears the Christian cross.
 
This scene made me weep. Literally weep, like putting the book aside and lying down to sob. Not because I don't believe in Christ. But because the Christ I know is not who they met. Because they mostly didn't have a choice, but "chose" Christianity to stay in the king's good graces or protection. Because the Christian priests used the religion not to enlighten or educate the people, but to gain power and wealth and, in their minds, to attain their position in heaven. And, because, I confess: I don't fully understand why we strive so hard to overthrow other people's beliefs. It seems so...sterile. So utterly without mystery, everyone believing in exactly the same thing. I know I probably shouldn't feel that way, but I do.
 
So yes: despite the difficult vocabulary, baffling politics, proliferation of similarly-named characters, and the length, I loved Hild. Was fascinated by it, in fact. The only drawback? I didn't know that the author would be writing a sequel—Hild's adventures as an abbess, I assume—and so, while it wrapped up...well, not exactly nicelyin the sense of morally and not-at-all-strange, but with at least a conclusion, there is still much more story to be told. I hope whenever the sequel is released, I have a cold (like I did when reading this one) so I can cocoon in my bed and read it in three or four days straight.

Book Note: Longbourn

I must start this book note with a confession:I am not a zealous Jane Austen fan. Don't get me wrong: I enjoy her books. I was captivated by Pride and Prejudice when I read it (for the first time) in my undergraduate days, and I liked Sense and Sensibility perhaps just a little bit more. This might sound strange, as I'm obviously not a wealthy, snobby British man who thinks his wealth makes him better than others, but I totally relate to Mr. Darcy, who I think is a classic misunderstood introvert; if i had to pick a character from classic literature who's most like me, he'd be near the top of my list.
 
I'm not anti-Austen.
 
I'm just not rabidly pro-Austen.
 
I've never read Mansfield Park.
 
I read Northanger Abbey, but so long ago I only have a faint memory of the general plot.
 
I absolutely abhor Emma. (That bossy personality, the type that things she knows better than everyone? I can't sit still with it long enough even to enjoy the outcome.)
 
And my favorite movie version of P&P is the Keira Knightly one (namely because Jennifer Ehle is, in my head, entirely not Elizabeth Bennett and Susannah Harker isn't Jane), even though my favorite Mr. Darcy is Colin Firth. (That spot in the BBC version when he's walking in his boots up from the lake? shivers.) And yes, I know, that ending!, and the slightly rushed feel, and seriously, why didn't they just get Colin Firth again, etc. I still love it most.
 
It's a truth universally known, though, that English majors are supposed to love Jane Austen, right? Which is why this feels like a confession.
 
Except, I'm actually fairly comfortable with my middling emotions for Jane Austen.
 
They make it so I've actually only read part of one Jane-Austen-fan-girl book, Austenland. I got partway through it and I found myself thinking apologies, Shannon Hale, because while I love Goose Girl and I adore Enna Burning, this Jane Austen thing is just not working for me. I can't relate.
 
Any Jane Austen spin offs or homages have (mostly) been ignored by me. (I did thoroughly enjoy For Darkness Shows the Stars, however, which is a post-apocalyptic retelling of Persuasion.)
 
LongbournSo I have to sort of explain why I wanted to read Longbourn, which tells the story of the largely-invisible servants in Pride and Prejudice. It wasn't really its connection to P&P, but its time period and my affinity for non-wealthy protagonists. (An affinity that Jane Austen, of course, decidedly did not share.) Probably I like books like Longbourn because they make me feel like A Little Princess did when I was a child, or at least the parts of it when Sara was a maid: startled out of my comfortable position by the suffering of a literary character from long, long ago.
 
The character in Longbourn is another Sarah, the housemaid. Her job is laundry, mostly, and cleaning, and helping to cook, and running to Meryton to fetch silk flowers for the Bennett girls' dancing shoes. Curling their hair, helping them dress, waiting up with a candle for them after balls. But Lizzie, Jane et al are only minor characters on the fringes of Sarah's life—the people who create a sort of misery for her (blithely handing her their chamber pots), but not the point.
 
An orphan with only a few vague, sweet memories of her parents, Sarah has lived at Longbourn since she was fairly young, when Mrs. Hill, the housekeeper, adopted her from the poorhouse. A few years later, they brought another housemaid, Polly, to help as well. Along with Mr. Hill, the butler, they keep Longbourn running as smoothly as possible. Then Mr. Bennett hires a man named James to serve as a manservant (apparently a very fashionable thing to have in Napoleonic England, as men not occupied with war were scarce), and sparks, of a sort, fly.
 
For a bit of the book, my non-fangirl self got a little bit worried, because it seemed like the story would follow an Austen-esque curve, a young woman misunderstanding the men around her and then the way it all settles out in the end. But while it threatened, it didn't actually do that. It went in a sort of earthier way, romance-wise, than anything afforded to a woman of upper class breeding. Then it took an entirely unexpected turn, in the form of a long flashback about one of the character's war experiences. (In this sense, it reminded me most of Atonement, although they're mostly nothing alike.)
 
I enjoyed seeing the familiar arc of P&P—not just the story, but the setting and the characters—from a different perspective. Lizzie's trip to London, for example, has an entirely different meaning for Sarah. We also get to see a bit of Lizzie settled down in Pemberley, and a glimpse of married Mr. Darcy. Mrs. Bennett, behind doors, is more likeable; Mr. Wickham much more wicked. The Bingleys' servants are worked into the story as well.
 
But what I liked best were the parts where Sarah's story was just her own: connected to the Bennetts' lives because she worked and cared for them, but not the shaping force of her life. Sarah is an interesting character all on her own; she is mostly trapped by her life's circumstances, but she still wants more than just being a housemaid for her entire life. We also learn James's story, and the Hills', and a little bit of Polly's. We see an entirely different perspective of the time period, one with its own set of rules and manners, much more harsh and brutal than the Bennetts' world but somehow more vivid for its misery and hardship.
 
So! Even if you are, like me, not a fervent Austen fan, but like her work well enough, or if you enjoy historical fiction, or romance that feels authentic and believable, I think you'll like Longbourn. Of course, if you are an ardent Austen fan, you might not like it. You might even hate it, as you'll get a glimpse of the Bennetts' dirty laundry, both literally and figuratively. And if you love adaptations of Austen's work—the kind that further the characters' stories with more gentle, fluffy, wealthy-adoring plot lines—you'll very likely not love Longbourn. It is a rougher, more violent and sensual story. But it might just give you a different perspective on P&P if you'll try it.

July 2014 Review

I can’t believe August is here already! I confess, I’m not ready for summer to be over, because then fall will be here. Since fall is my favorite season, you’d think I’d be excited…but I almost don’t want it to come because once it gets here, it’ll be over before I know it. This year is going too fast.

So I’m holding on to summer just a little bit longer by thinking about our July.

There was some frustration. Through a failure of communication, Jake didn’t find out about his camp out dates until four days before the camp out. (The amazing and exciting camp out in Moab that he’d heard rumors of and was actually excited about.) With such short notice, he couldn’t find enough people to cover his four shifts at work, so he didn’t go. If I’m honest I’ll confess that I’m still pretty angry and frustrated about this. He is struggling to have a desire to be involved in church activities, so for him to not be able to go somewhere he wanted to go…I feel like it was a missed opportunity for him to build some connections.

There was the end of a long-held summer tradition: Haley and I going to the Nordstrom sale together. We’ve done it since 2003…shopping for back-to-school clothes.

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Our first Nordstrom sale...in 2003!

But this year, between her busy work schedule, our Yosemite trip, and the cold that’s knocked me out for the past ten days, it just didn’t ever work out for us to go together. I did stop in one evening when Kendell had to run to Salt Lake for something else. But shopping with your husband just isn’t the same as shopping with your daughter. (I did buy myself a new pair of black pants. Because, you know…I don’t have anything black to wear.)

I did get to see Haley in July though. She came at the beginning of July just to see us—in fact, she surprised me! 20140706_201423
Then, in the middle of the month, her catering job (she’s working two jobs this summer) took her to UVU (one of the colleges in Utah County) every day for a week, and on Friday I bought a couple of Sensuous Sandwiches and met her there for a quick lunch. Then, on the last weekend of July, she had an unexpected few days off in a row, so she drove down. It makes me happy to have everyone sleeping in our house again! We did some shopping and some talking, and she reconnected with her brothers, too.

We ate grilled cheeseburgers several times. Kaleb and I sat out on the grass to eat (everyone else thought it was too hot to eat outside) and had some awesome conversations. One of them centered around what kind of girl he should marry. He decided she should be “nice, kind, smart, and pretty. Like my mom.” Awwwww…
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We celebrated the 4th of July with a barbeque and fireworks at our friends’ house. They have a dog who is old and has cancer and will die soon, and when Kaleb found out, he started to worry. The next day, when he was outside playing with his friends, he came and sat on our porch and started crying, because he was so sad about Bart (the dog). We had our friends send us some pictures, and he looks at them all the time. Such a tender heart.

We celebrated my mom’s and Becky’s birthdays with a family party at my sister’s pool. July 2014 review all of us with mom 4x6
It was so hot that I, Amy Sorensen, got into the pool. (I usually just sit around sunbathing in the lounge chairs.) This was the day I made three cakes: before the party at my sister’s, we went to the farewell of my nephew, who left on his LDS mission this month. I brought two sheet cakes (I always make the Pioneer Woman sheet cake) for the farewell and a berry Mary Anne cake for my sister’s house. Then I ran out of flour. That day, I finally gave Becky the gift I made for her birthday (only a week late…after I made it three and a half months early!) 

Kendell and I hiked to the top of the Y mountain (like…the actual mountain, not just the Y, it’s confusing until you know that yes, the trail does keep going!)

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And to the top of Timp. The wildflowers this year were amazing.

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And Half Dome, of course!

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Jake and I hiked together on the long trail to Buffalo Peak. We didn't make it all the way to the peak...he hit the wall a bit, and then we sort of ran out of time. But it was nice to walk and talk together! (Talk, that is, when we weren't huffing and puffing.)

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And Kaleb, Jake, and I (and 1000 other people) hiked to Stewart Falls one Saturday.

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The last Sunday in June, Nathan sprained his ankle. (Convenient timing…our new deductible for our health insurance started on July 1!) So he spent the first two weeks of July not playing basketball. Or running. Or doing much more than sitting around with his ankle propped up, icing it and stretching it and massaging it. I am astounded at how quickly he healed. He was worried, but it didn’t stop him from going on the two trips he had planned: he went to St. George for a student council conference, and he went to Camp Williams for youth conference (he cut his finger open and probably should’ve had it stitched closed…but no adults saw it so now he just has an ugly scar).

Jake went to get his hair cut, and while he was waiting, David Archuleta walked in. Just to, you know, the crappy little Fantastic Sam’s in Orem. He had to sit down to wait, too, so Jake (and Idgy) got the nerve up to ask him for a picture. We’re not rabid David Archuleta fans, but it was still pretty cool.

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I ran 17.5 miles.

I hiked 49.5 miles.

I made three scrapbook layouts. Here's one, and you can read about the other two HERE.

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And I made some oatmeal chocolate chip cookies.

How was your July?


Half Dome Hike in Yosemite: Part 1.

The day before we hiked Half Dome—the day Kendell and I saw bits and pieces of Yosemite for the first time in our lives—we stopped at the first trailhead my guidebook recommended, the one that leads to Lembert Dome, just off of Tioga Road. IMG_3526 lembert dome from base 4x6
We pulled into the parking lot and found a great parking spot right away (a good omen for my husband, who doesn't like looking for parking spots but also doesn't like small parking spaces or parking between cars), took off our traveling flip flops and put on our light hikers. Then we found the trail. IMG_3498 lembert dome sign 4x4
It was the wrong trail, turns out, the long way to Lembert Dome past Dog Lake, but I didn't care that my guide book had seemed to lie to me, because I was there, on a trail in Yosemite, moving through the shade of tall trees, and immediately I knew this was different. IMG_3540 pine trees and boulders
Every mountain has its own spirit, and as I wandered up the trail (the less step but longer way to Lembert Dome), I could sense just how different the Sierras are from my home range, the Wasatch. The soil was different, and the air (even though the elevation is not so different), the scent and the light, but especially the stone. There was no sliding, shifting shale clacking underneath our feet, but granite boulders, rounded or cracked through. A different texture, like hiking among God's casted off attempts at statues. His rough drafts, buried to their shoulders.

Or maybe the statues He meant to make.

We didn't want to hike too far or too long, because we knew we'd need every bit of energy for the next day. So we grew anxious when the trail was longer than we expected. We sought out advice from scout groups and Germans bewildered at our English questions. But we kept on and made it to the dome; we stood on top of it and looked at the view, calling it our pre-Half-Dome warm up. IMG_3510 lembert dome 4x6

And then, the next day, we hiked Half Dome.

And really: it was everything the guidebooks told me it would be. The mist trail up the side of Vernal Fall was a black staircase in greenery, and while the fall wasn't flowing hard enough to spray us, it still felt otherworldy: damp and verdant, but with that sense of unyielding time that stone has. No01 vernal fall and mist trail 4x6
I confess that I very nearly climbed over the railing when we got to the top of the fall. I wanted to sit right on the edge, with my feet dangling over—that dry patch, where no doubt in spring water flows. IMG_3583 vernal fall dry spot 4x6
I wanted to sit where water usually fell, but we had so much trail left to go that I didn't take the time. (I wish I would have.)

After Vernal Fall, the trail leads to the top of Nevada Fall, and it is strange to me how entirely different this section felt. The black and green was behind us, and the bridge took us over the Silver Apron, and "silver" seemed the right word, even though the stone was more golden. IMG_3594 silver apron 4x6
Silver in the sense of: the color that rushing water takes, or the way that silver seems full of blackness, despite its white light, like the way the stone is streaked with black ribbons where water—in that rushing color—used to fall. Despite the fact that my mind insisted on playing the music from The Last of the Mohicans in my head, what my ears were filled with as I climbed—steps and boulders and sometimes just instinct—was that sound, the booming hiss, of falling water. I love that sound.

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I got to the top of the fall first out of our group, so I sat on a tree trunk and hoped this was my Moment: a few minutes of solitude with just the sound of my quieting breath and the falling water. But Yosemite anywhere in July is not a place for solitude: nine other hikers, and then a long trail of mules led by a horse and rider, and then more hikers, and the bathroom and the line for the bathroom and then my people and, aside from a Stellar jay landing almost by my hand and squawking at me, there was no Moment. (I was glad for the bathroom anyway.)

After another series of uphill switchbacks, we walked through the Little Yosemite Valley, No03 little yosemite valley 4x6
which is mostly flat. It felt and looked different than I imagined, hotter and dryer (I had a wide, flowery, cool meadow in my head). Sandy, and silent: the water in the river seemed to hardly move at all. No04merced river reflection
 Then the trail turned left, to a long section through piney woods. I loved this part of the trail; it was steep but not aggressively, and the wild scent of trees and dirt on the breeze was invigorating. I was fascinated by the moss on the trees (that doesn’t happen in Utah).  _MG_3642 more mossy trees

We leapfrogged with another hiking group, making temporary trail friends. One of them saw a bear cub near this tree, so we lingered awhile to let it find its mother.

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I could sense rather than see when the summit of that slope was coming, and then there was a sharp switchback, and we had our first up-close view of Half Dome:

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All of those terrors kept at the back of my mind during the rest of the hike came forward. Here’s a truth about me as a hiker: while I’m not afraid of heights, I am afraid of steep down hills. As my hiking partners assessed the dome, and wondered how it was even possible to get up the sub dome section (the hump just above the middle of the picture, on the left side), let alone those cables up to the top, I was already afraid of coming down the sub dome.

As we walked the rest of the way to the sub dome (where there is a ranger who checks to make sure you have a permit), all the conversation was focused on the cables. I was silent, because my fears were different. I wasn’t afraid of the height, or of falling. Instead, I was afraid of not being strong enough. What would happen if I got halfway up and my puny arm strength vanished, and I couldn’t pull myself up or haul myself down?

The sub dome was hard. It was steep rock scrambling, with steps some of the way No08 sub dome 4x6
and with a find-your-own-way section where I immediately went the wrong way and hiked myself into an impossible spot. I didn’t dare take the enormous step I’d need to (up onto the next slab of granite), so then I had to sit down and back track via butt and hands. Then I let Kendell lead, which was OK because I lead him up the cables.

Kendell is afraid of heights. He told me later that he wasn’t sure until the very second he started climbing the cables whether or not he’d do it. Photo
After talking to every person there, and adjusting our gloves and taking some pictures and drinking some water, I couldn’t talk about it anymore. I just started up. And a few minutes later he followed.

Going up the cables was nothing like I had expected. I had thought it would be like a really intense arm workout. But instead, it was a full-body experience, cardio and muscle, every part of my body, not just my arms. The stone was slippery from so much use. I found myself wanting to go as fast as possible, not out of fear but just to see if I could. On the cables, at almost each set of poles, there is a 2x4 nudged up against the poles. Sometimes I’d stand on the wood, and huff and rest a bit. I looked around and I said out loud: I am here. Other times, I’d look up and make sure no one was too close above me, and then I’d just keep going. Sometimes I’d look down at Kendell and shout encouragement. I really wanted to take a picture, right in the middle, but I wasn’t sure I could manage gloves, camera, my grip on the cable, and still keep my feet from slipping. (Now I wish I had tried.)

It is both steeper than it looks, especially as you get to the second half, and not quite as hard as I’d imagined. No10 start of cables 4x6
Despite my worries about being weak in my upper body, the hardest part of the cables for me came at the spots where the route met with the edge of a slab of stone. Looking up, they don’t look like a big deal. When you have to take that three-foot step up? It was hard on my weak ankle. (It’s throbbing right now while I remember.) It didn’t matter if I lead with my left or not…it was complaining. At each giant step, I took a deep breath. I hoped my supporting leg didn’t slip. I ignored my ankle’s thrumming and then I stepped up. I kept going, hands and arms and back and legs moving and pulling, and I made it: to the top of Half Dome.

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(coming next: the rest of our Half Dome story.)